Thursday, January 15, 2009

Revised Outline

Quote: "It's kind of fun to do the impossible."
by Walt Disney

I intend to connect it to the historical achievement, done by Neil Armstrong, of walking on the moon and learning more about it.

Thesis:
Walt Disney's quote shows how things that were once impossible can be achieved. As for that, Neil Armstrong's achievement, of being the first man walking on the moon, is a good example of an historical event that was once impossible to achieved.

Body Paragraphs
1. Walt Disney's achievements and inspiration for others.
Evidence: The Internet Movie Database (Link)
How has he been an inspiration/icon for others? (My opinion included)
Start to connect Disney with Armstrong.

2. Neil Armstrong's success on doing something never done before. Describe the Apollo 11 objective.
Evidence: NASA (Link)
How is this an historical event?

3. Describe the connection made by me of Neil and Walt.
Explain my perspective of this relation.
Why did I relate them?

4. Conclusion
"....humanity is not forever chained to this planet and our visions go rather further than that and our opportunities are unlimited. "



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